Serial Fiction Beta Reads

Seed, Part 8

Directing the Eye

Steve Fendt
3 min readNov 9, 2022
Rainy Tuesday in Carlton | Steve Fendt

Author’s note for this beta read

  • Please go easy on the highlights.
  • Please, please comment! Be as honest as you like.
  • I’m putting all 12 parts up simultaneously. You can use the list at the end to move between parts.



Steve Fendt Short stories, serial fiction, memoirs of a possibly quasi-true nature. Aussie tales of banjos, beaches and the bush.